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I love the tones. You retained very delicate highlights in the dress and skin, a must in my book. The subjects pose feels natural and not at all contrived. She's well framed by the large window, maybe move her to the left a little so she's not so "bulls eyed". I think that would compliment the dark crack in the wall on the right... but that's getting pretty picky.